Spoiler alert
Christian, not remembering he has already killed Alek, is consumed upon waking from a coma he must find Alek to apologize for ruining Alek’s academic future…
To develope:
- [ ] Doug tells Chelsea at some point that Christian won’t find Alek because Alek’s already been found…and a murder victim(?)
- [ ] Chelsea wanting to tell her father(?) before detectives can speak to Christian
- [ ] … which eventually sparks his memory of a struggle with Alek. (Christian had already attempted to apologize but it went badly!)
- [ ] A near Last scene is a double of memory of the attempted apology with Christian on a park bench telling imagined Alek he accused him of plagiarism because he simply didn’t believe Alek could have conceived of or written such a beautiful thesis…
- [ ] Detective Napoleon Smith approaches Christian on that bench and engages in the conversation as if speaking for Alek.
- [ ] End in father’s home… an unsatisfactory resolution for Chelsea’s (sub theme of a) bipolar psyche… arguing with her dismissive brothers about their relationships with their father and Chelsea’s presumed mental illness… Chelsea knocks an hourglass off his desk.
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